tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8199782930459196945.post2324005470106901165..comments2023-12-26T19:57:30.711-05:00Comments on Teaching Young Writers: And so it goes...Betsy Hubbardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8199782930459196945.post-89163721352701602072012-07-28T08:37:40.926-04:002012-07-28T08:37:40.926-04:00I LOVE that last stanza of your snail poem!!
Than...I LOVE that last stanza of your snail poem!!<br /><br />Thanks for the peek into your notebook! One of the people at the writing retreat who read my hawk poem (and saw how it was born in my notebook) suggested that a picture of the notebook pages should go along with the poem. That picture didn't make it to the blog, but I'll definitely share it with my students!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8199782930459196945.post-36918568738820920532012-07-28T06:27:30.683-04:002012-07-28T06:27:30.683-04:00Your snail drawing and its poem are precious! Who ...Your snail drawing and its poem are precious! Who knew a snail could be so cute? I really like the stanza you shared from your driftwood poem. You've got a fresh perspective.Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8199782930459196945.post-9484896402500993592012-07-27T21:36:41.442-04:002012-07-27T21:36:41.442-04:00Betsy, I loved the peeks into your notebook! I enj...Betsy, I loved the peeks into your notebook! I enjoyed the use of drawings and colors mixed with your words. I especially like the sun/water drawing. My favorite line is from the snail poem: "You slide a path of memory." Love it!Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01132042235993262800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8199782930459196945.post-48865455330264951172012-07-27T20:02:33.739-04:002012-07-27T20:02:33.739-04:00I like each one, Dana, but especially "the da...I like each one, Dana, but especially "the day washed away". We are so in need of rain, & here, at the end of the day, we received a welcome rain shower for about a half hour. It was grand! Thanks for your sharing. I've been in & will be out again next week for more traveling. Summer is closing...Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8199782930459196945.post-67803595328373835442012-07-27T19:49:39.054-04:002012-07-27T19:49:39.054-04:00Thank you for the peek into your notebook. It is g...Thank you for the peek into your notebook. It is good to see handwriting and drawings. I love "the wet multi-colored spectacle." That's just what it is. I also love the idea of the memories of a piece of driftwood. Happy end of July!Karin Fisher-Goltonhttp://karinfisher-golton.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8199782930459196945.post-64144677344385684322012-07-27T17:19:41.357-04:002012-07-27T17:19:41.357-04:00Yum! Your poetry is very sweet- love the image of ...Yum! Your poetry is very sweet- love the image of a mother waving her seeds into the breeze- beauty! And that snails have unavoidable patience! :D Sweet stuff here! Thanks!Kinderchathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17659228186865258389noreply@blogger.com